Sandwich Approach to Paragraph Critique

1. Mention the elements of the paragraph that the writer does well. This is the bread, the outside of the sandwich).
2. Explain which elements need more attention and why. This is the filling, the middle of the sandwich.
3. Tell the writer something positive you got from the paragraph, such as new information or a helpful perspective. There is something positive to say about every effort. This is the bread on the other side of the sandwich.